oh my love, i’d like to visit the skies, with you sitting on my lap,
under the glistening pieces of light
for oh my love indeed, i did not gaze to care
if they were whole or not

oh how your almond like eyes felt so soft, as and when i looked into them
oh how i still seem to remember,
the way you held my lips to yours
oh how my love,

you tasted; your sweetest even on the darkest nights
making love, naked; beneath, underneath; all alike
in; oh your presence always felt the warmest

oh it was then i knew
all my love needed to prosper, was you

barkat is a urdu word which means ‘prosperity’.


  1. pick1solution · March 27

    Very interesting.


  2. gretchenwing · March 28

    Thank you for your beautiful words, and thanks for following Wing’s World!


  3. natuurfreak2 · March 29

    Mooi gedicht.Bedankt om me te volgen


  4. argyris446 · March 29

    Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.


  5. lilyionamackenzie · March 31

    Thanks for taking time away from your writing to visit my blog!


  6. Itarow · April 2

    Beautiful writing!


  7. kerriebdross · April 11



  8. Perry Casilio · April 20

    Lovely + touching poem :)


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